This is the first movie I have ever made, and it is a preview of an upcoming series starring myself and my guild mates. Please comment, as I would appreciate some feedback. I know it's not the best movie in the world, but I still hope you enjoy it!!
Myssiing - Stonemaul (US)
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2006-10-02 14:53:22
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photochik02 (2007-07-26 13:45:58) lol yeah, i know it kind of sucks. and she wasn't supposed to look scary. that's what was supposed to be funny. *shrug* screwed that one up, didn't I? lol thanks for the comments guys.
sersjantn (2007-01-23 10:37:50) Uhmm.....A low-level troll is coming...OH NOO!!=P
Filiusnox (2007-01-04 10:49:14) hmmm not bad for your first video.
but the troll female didn't looked very scary and strong to me
omdabomb7 (2006-12-23 03:10:20) Not bad for a first vid m8 keep it up
FARTMUFFINS (2006-11-24 10:57:05) It was a preview for it!
God ppl read!
bandito (2006-10-11 12:45:34) 13th! oh wait... thats a unlucky number.....oh well nice intro i guess
Craven (2006-10-07 13:18:20) kinda boring - but OK as a first movie :P
i liked the part "...and those who cannot..." xD
ashtarian (2006-10-07 04:09:34) LET HER COME! ALLIANCE FOR EVER!3/5 not great
kellir (2006-10-03 13:47:15) its his first movie and a preview of umcomming series so i think its good
Iwilltank (2006-10-03 10:42:33) THIS SUX!! MY BURN MY GOD DAMN EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Erunno (2006-10-03 02:33:28) PS: Don't use so many transistions ^^
Erunno (2006-10-03 02:31:04) Wow, Talvas. And I tough that only I care writing such things in the comments O_o.
Ok, my turn now:
Editing: The text is a bit boring. Use other fonts people! The Game Cam logo could be cut out (gives the ¨it's really a movie¨ feeling).
Music: It's good.
Scenes: Showing landscape. Hmmm, next time try to tell a story with clips, not the text between the clips.
Because its your first movie its normal to get a low rate. Don't give up and keep expanding your movie editing skills.
And don't listen to the ¨WTF is this?¨ comments.
Helmut (2006-10-03 01:07:51) Wait wait! Did I see this whole crap to see like a lvl 30 trolll!? THIS SUCKS!Iam out of here!
comanderfek (2006-10-02 22:09:05) I am still in the beggingin there is nouthiung that catches my eye, You need more excitment in your moives. try again i think you can do better. i too give it a 2 out of 5
comanderfek (2006-10-02 22:09:04) I am still in the beggingin there is nouthiung that catches my eye, You need more excitment in your moives. try again i think you can do better. i too give it a 2 out of 5
Ragecleaver (2006-10-02 18:20:09) music was nice.
What are the series about? you and your mates riding on wyverns?
Smelly (2006-10-02 17:51:12) Bad, just bad.
Talvas (2006-10-02 15:31:28) (Extended Movie Review)
Editing: It was like a sort of news or sports report, the transitions, (one clip to another) looked like it was not suitable.
Story-line: Ok, after viewing landscape for about 4min, it comes to the undercity and shows you around.
It doesen't really seem amazing and the text is just boring, its nothing amazing.
--Overall Rating: 2/5--
Not recommended viewing, unless you want to listen to some music which is OK.
(2nd Post!)
Talvas (2006-10-02 15:28:23) (1st!) - Movie Review
Editing: Nothing amazing, not very suitable for the film, especially the transitions.
Story-Line: Viewing landscape, text in red popping up explaning it.
--Overall Rating: 2/5--
Not a recommended viewing, unless you want to listen to some climatic music, which is OK.